Disjunction: Looking at Bernard Tschumi’s idea of ‘disjunction’, a relationship between space and event I was intrigued by the way space create a new events which accidently happen or unclassified. Space creates events and sometimes event creates new undefined spaces. Sometimes they correspond with one another. Sometimes they conflict with one another. Sometimes they ignore each other.
In Between Spaces: A fine line between spaces created and separation that defines another space. This is so vague that people don’t really care much about, misjudged or not even realized. Looking at a bigger scale, urban defines itself by its urban fabric (Layout, solid and void, road, building form and scale). Walking around city gives a person an experience of what the city want you to see and what you actually see. Places like back allies, gaps, margin, slip road, partition, wall are the subjects to look at which are the mediator between space and events.
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1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial investigation into max
6.5_/10
Comments:
I think that the interpret concept of “fence” is interesting. But, it needs to take further to explore the idea of "exposed" and "protected". The video didn’t show strong relate to the concept.
2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes of form generation etc.
6_/10
Comments:
I think he is doing a right way to experiment exercise. It need to more develop the idea.
3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability of work and concepts.
7/10
Comments:
Understandable and good resolution.
Misc comments:
Need to upload a storyboard and few video to support your brilliant idea.
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