1] Narrative/Thematics
Theoretical framework and the strength of initial investigation
Story boarding, visual research, testing of ideas and initial investigation into max
6.5_/10
Comments:
I think that the interpret concept of “fence” is interesting. But, it needs to take further to explore the idea of "exposed" and "protected". The video didn’t show strong relate to the concept.
2] Max Component
Complexity of form and motion. Conceptualization of source imagery/documentation, testing methods and processes of form generation etc.
6_/10
Comments:
I think he is doing a right way to experiment exercise. It need to more develop the idea.
3] Video Editing Component
Structure of narrative, background/foreground resolution, integration of source images, text and sound into animation. Resolution/readability of work and concepts.
7/10
Comments:
Understandable and good resolution.
Misc comments:
Need to upload a storyboard and few video to support your brilliant idea.
